Kurai Leader Competition

right, we have two people who want leadership of the Kurai pack and the are both female.
Soo i need you to have a roleplay competiition someone will start will a block of roleplay, then the other will carry on. I will decide who roleplayed the position best and they will be the female alpha.

You guys can choose who starts

Contestants:
Hotaru (Liberty+Courage)
Harp

The sky was black. Clouds covered the moon. Cats slunk out of their hiding places. Wolves stalked them. Harp included.

Hotaru slank out of the bushes, her pelt blending into the darkness of the night. She flicked her tail, sinaling to attack, she waited for a reply

Harp glanced back. Lunging forward, she whipped around to Hotaru. She growled deeply, bearing her teeth and snarling.

(I couldn't tell if you were attacking the cats or me so I chose me. XD)

(lol i thought we were working together) Hotaru jumps back in suprise. why did she attack? arent we both after the cats? She flattens her ears, and bareing her teeth, snarling back...her pack stood waiting behind her, wondering what to do. they thought agression would be what was expected, so one by one the pulled back there lips...Thunder boomed and rain started to drizzle, hydrateing the parched soil around the wolves

(wait we dont have pack support yet. . . neither of us have a pack. that's what we're )
competing for!)

Harp lunged, her shadow huge against the now-soaked ground. Her teeth met Hoteru's wet fur. Shaking water from her eyes, she let go, snarling and deciding whether or not to flee.

(lol i thought we were making this up as we go along! scratch the pack )(what part of my body did you bite) Hotaru lunges back, quickly locking teeth into your scruff. A cat notices the noises and yowls in warning, they scatter

(body)

Easily shaking Hotaru off, Harp whipped around. Her eyes glowed with hatred. Growling deeply, she knocked Hotaru off her paws and pinned her to the ground. (sorry if that's god-modding i dont think it is though)

(ehh, ill get out of it XD) hotaru quickly skakes away the blood and rain clinging to her pelt and kicks harp with her hind legs, lauinching her off and skidding on the slick ground, a growl rose in her throaght. Lungeing, she snapped at harps neck, and clwed at her chest

(oh, i forgot to mention, whoever loses is supposed to become an Omega of the pack)

(ACK! now the stakes are higher!! *faints*)

(ok )

Nipping Hotaru's paws lightly, she draws blood causing her paws to slip. (either that or I bite myself causing blood to let me slip out of your grasp xD) Her soaked fur chilled her to the bone. She growled deeply.
"This is just the beginning. I haven't even warmed up yet!"

Hotaru smirks, the growls in reply "like i'd ever back down!" she then turns back, walks a couple yards down , and shaking the blood of her paw. Whiping around, she bolts at you, jumps over yor body. Turning back around, she swipes a paw on your back, leaving a wave a red fire : blood.

Ignoring the searing pain, Harp lunged. She didn't bother to put any effort into her attack. Her eyes were glazed with pain, and she knew she wouldn't be able to continue for much longer. Hotaru had broken one of her back bones. (vertebrae, whatever)

(i did? oops) Hotaru smirks once agian and steps back. There was nothing Harp could do now. Unless some series of unimadginalble events occur she had won.

(it was only a very small crack, though)

But Hotaru had underestimated Harp's endurance. She easily leaped onto Hotaru, pinning her downHarp snarled, fangs bared at Hotaru's throat. (HA!)

() Hotaru, taken by suprise flinches. Thinkinking quickly, hotaru leans forward and bites you sqaurley on the muzzle

Harp whimpers but doesn't let Hotaru go. She begins to speak, quickly shaking Hotaru off.
"Sometimes luck wins. Sometimes miracles happen. Sometimes determinations succeeds over all."

hotaru bites you again, harder.

Harp opens her jaws and twists her head, badly hurting Hotaru's teeth. (biting on the muzzle doesn't do much . . . you're biting my nose most.)

hotaru squirms, spitting out multiple teeth.

(. . . oops)

Harp, shocked and slightly regretful, steps back out of instinct.

Hotaru jumps up, baring her rewmaning teeth. she had lost 5, but still had a good set. Jumpimg on harp, she pinned her. holding her legs down she held her firmly on her belly. Thunder boomed.

Harp winced at the pressure that was on her back. Despite her pain she reached forward and bit Hotaru on the muzzle. Then twisted. If Hotaru tried the same trick Harp had tried on her, twisting the jaw of the oppoment, Harp would be ready. Her teeth were stronger than Hotaru's.

(im on your back, you would need to turn your head 180 degrees around to bite me or at least like 170 degrees,wolves (along with all other vertabraes exept for rule breaking can owls )can olny go about90, if the realy strain.)